Industrial ScriptsReviews of industrialscripts.com

I've been using Industrial Scripts on several occasions during the last two years. Each time they took great care in understanding what the goal of the script was and making really clear what was interesting, where it was falling short and most importantly why they thought that way. They also take the time to provide advice on how to improve the weaknesses, without breaking down the initial intent. They are extremely valuable and I will keep using their service.

Every time I use their service the coverage I receive is invaluable in improving my script.

Intelligent. To the point. Perceptive. You've gained my trust. Thanks, Allen

I asked for the 7 day dry run script report - the feedback was solid and appropriate and perceivably spot on - the coverage came back a day or two under 7 days!

The analysis for the script was highly detailed and the feedback was very useful. The recommendations for the development of the script were well thought out and it was clear that the author of the report was highly experienced in the industry. Since receiving the feedback for the first script we have used Industrial Scripts twice and would highly recommend their services.

This is the second time I submit a script to Industrial Scripts and, just like the first time, I´ve received a high-level quality report earlier than expected. The analysis is thorough, clearly exposed and offers a proper balance between the strong points and the weak points of the script. Again, the reflections and the suggestions of the report provide very useful insight that help me see the bigger picture in relation to my story.

This was my second report on the same script. The first helped me to greatly improve the script in all areas. Especially the ending which was flat and an anti climax. After fixing all the problems with the last draft I sent it back for further evaluation, this time getting even deeper notes. Just when I thought I had a faultless draft I got a whole bunch of new notes that will make my script a real winner. I cannot wait to finish this new draft and get it back in for further scrutiny. The last set of notes covered everything from Plot, sub plots, character development, dialogue and possible solutions to fix these problems. Highly recommend these guys. I have used a lot of others, Scriptapalooza, Michael Hauge, but these guys are the best.

Bolstering yet thought-provoking feedback that continues to percolate my pages...